Tuesday, May 27, 2008

a lazy sunday

silent half-dead Sun
mumbling, a distant dog
peace and smells of life that has passed
a silent window
muted memories of a lost love
Sunday, a lazy one,
around my home

2 comments:

Georg said...

Splendid little text; Berenice.

You just invented the king size Haiku .

Next step:
make it rhyme,
when you have time
no need to do it soon
wait for a lazy Sunday afternoon.

Georg

bereweber said...

oh danke dear Georg
heh heh you made me laugh with the 'king size Haiku'
and yes! that sounds like a good project for a rainy lazy Sunday...

i never think of rhyming while writing my silly little poems, but next time (?) ...

a smile to France!