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Splendid little text; Berenice. You just invented the king size Haiku . Next step: make it rhyme,when you have timeno need to do it soonwait for a lazy Sunday afternoon.Georg
oh danke dear Georgheh heh you made me laugh with the 'king size Haiku'and yes! that sounds like a good project for a rainy lazy Sunday...i never think of rhyming while writing my silly little poems, but next time (?) ...a smile to France!
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Splendid little text; Berenice.
You just invented the king size Haiku .
Next step:
make it rhyme,
when you have time
no need to do it soon
wait for a lazy Sunday afternoon.
Georg
oh danke dear Georg
heh heh you made me laugh with the 'king size Haiku'
and yes! that sounds like a good project for a rainy lazy Sunday...
i never think of rhyming while writing my silly little poems, but next time (?) ...
a smile to France!
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