Tuesday, May 27, 2008

a lazy sunday

silent half-dead Sun
mumbling, a distant dog
peace and smells of life that has passed
a silent window
muted memories of a lost love
Sunday, a lazy one,
around my home

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2 comments:

  1. GeorgWednesday, May 28, 2008 12:27:00 AM

    Splendid little text; Berenice.

    You just invented the king size Haiku .

    Next step:
    make it rhyme,
    when you have time
    no need to do it soon
    wait for a lazy Sunday afternoon.

    Georg

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  2. bereweberWednesday, May 28, 2008 6:57:00 PM

    oh danke dear Georg
    heh heh you made me laugh with the 'king size Haiku'
    and yes! that sounds like a good project for a rainy lazy Sunday...

    i never think of rhyming while writing my silly little poems, but next time (?) ...

    a smile to France!

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